Talk:Ichijou Tsukino/@comment-68.35.38.210-20151027041352/@comment-26087580-20151027135615

Okay, I'll unblock you back at ff-dot-net and then we can try this again. So sorry about our little fight back then, I was just in those days again, but that doesn't mean being a bitch was justifiable. Let's do our best.

But like mr. Sred said before, the main point is making things more natural. For starters, avoid writing your oc bio in the prologue so no one expects too much of him in the first place.