Talk:Twin Triaina/@comment-26087580-20181002102528/@comment-26709288-20181002180909

I have read multiple of your pages and to my knowledge it seems you're trying to make a future fic, but my criticism is the fact that you're overtly relying on the canon (past) characters in your creation of your story.

For example, you're character Rei. She possesses a spear-like sacred gear, is the descendant of a legendary hero (ironically she's the descendant of the True Longinus's original weilder) plus she's the leader of the Hero Faction and possess a calm, stoic, manipulative, battle hungry, etc.

She's basically just Cao Cao 2.0. Her powers and abilities are also complete parralel to Cao Cao's. There's basically nothing setting her apart from the leader of the Original Hero Faction.

My advice to you, would be to focus on actually establishing original ideas and expanding them. You can do research on creating characters (which is what I do) in order to come up with their own personalities, motives, experiences, etc.

I think future fanfics are interesting and fun to read but if your story is just rehashing the same people used in the original story then what's the point.

Don't pull a Legend of Korra.