Talk:Kazuki Hyoudou/@comment-118.209.43.3-20180205095804

Hello, there. I've been reading your Twin Dragons story and just found out about the newest addition Royal Wild Card, which impressed me.

To be honest, you did (and still do) a great job in building your Original Characters and Concepts, but you still need to improve in creating the twist in plot and narration themselves. So far, reading your story is no much different than reading the Light Novel, only with your original concepts stickered around - it's underwhelming.