Thread:ShatteredRose23/@comment-27935232-20181226062238/@comment-26709288-20190102050632

Hey so I was waiting til I had some free time to read over some of the pages and here's what I have to say: I read the Noah page and I found it good. I like how Noah doesn't have a dead parent or a missing parent and actually lived a semi-decent life with them. I think the story, where it goes, could be pretty interesting if written well, considering it could center around Slashdog and irish mythology rather than Rias and the Underworld.

My only criticism is the fact that I hate transfered to another world stories in fanfiction, however this one seems like it was due to comedy relief and not a self insert so I would let it slide.