Talk:Geist D. Pheles (The Lovable Devil)/@comment-26709288-20160626035409

Love the history. I love villains who get turned the way they are due to tragic and terrible events. Villains who are just evil for the sake of evil are the worst kind. Now villains who are evil because they were screwed over are much, more interesting.

Also, I like how unlike other fanfictions that usually are lazy when writing villains. He has actual motives, goals, and dreams of his own. He's not just someone who's rampaging for the sake of rampaging he's twisted and insane and he has a evil dragon by his side. It lets readers know you put alot of effort into creating Vincent.

I also love how you gave him decent powers. If a villain is supposed to be mighty and powerful and a threat they're supposed to have the power and strength to back that up. Alot of writers tend to forget that and they create a villain that's all bark but no bite.

Anyways, this is a very interesting character and I can't wait to read the fanfic.