Talk:All For One/@comment-35675122-20190705113740

The only personal issue I have with it is that it is rather close to its inspiration in terms of ability; overall, however, I like it. Good job.

As for you saying "there have been only two unknown users," I assume you mean by there being only two users throughout history. Just in case you mean otherwise, I will point out that only one Longinus of each type can exist at once normally. Someone, more than likely, will go in on you about that; I just want to get that out of the way as nicely as I can while throwing in any other advice I have. You can make the "two users at the same time" work, theoretically, since God's system has been prone to glitches in canon since his death. I have an entire species on this fanon which is just a massive glitch in reality.

If you plan on using this for a story, I would recommend putting a fair amount of consideration into the drawbacks; where would the tension be in a fight if the person in question could just mimic the opponent's ability and combine it with an entire arsenal of others whilst also disabling the opponent's newly stolen power. So far, I see the possibility of volatile combinations and possible weakness contraction as the two major drawbacks; this is a good start.

If it is used for an antagonist, then you could probably cheat a little on that; but do be sure not to make him/her too powerful as to not write yourself into a corner and force an asspull to defeat him/her.

Once again, I like the idea and its symbolism of humanity's limitless potential quite a bit. Do take my advice with a grain of salt as I am relatively new to writing (started about six months ago, if I recall correctly). Someone will probably rail me for my (possible) fallacies, so do keep an eye on those responses and take them into consideration.