Thread:兵藤 一誠/@comment-22439-20150726183741/@comment-26821288-20151114183956

Thanks. You really helped. I figured out most of it. Well, volume 2 is pretty much shitty as well, and has almost no details. Volume 3 has more details, although. Volume 4 has pretty much details. Not about everything, although. Regarding the looks of the characters... I think about writing their looks in volume 5, as well as describing much more things. By the way, volume 4 is pretty much good, to my opinion. Although, there still is the problem of details, probably. But, in volume 4, this isn't that much critic problem, or so I just hope. I pretty much thought about the looks of the characters, so I'll write them in volume 5, because volume 4 is... I don't know... I already wrote volume 4 without details such as looks, because of what I wrote in some Afterword. It was of volume 2, I think. Anyway, there'll be more and more details, as you'll continue reading. But, please don't forget, volume 1 was... Written... In a bit of a hurry, I guess... And I was nothing more than some newbie. And volume 2 was... Written... Also, in a bit of a hurry, I guess. But it still does get better. Not by a whole lot better, but better than volume 1. And volume 3 is getting much better versed and described. It has about 2 times the words that volume 1 contains (volume 1 and volume 2 contain about the same amount of words in total). And in terms of pages, it (volume 3) doesn't have double. So, volume 3 is actually pretty good versed. Although, volume 4 might be of my bests ever. Ell-oh-ell. Sorry for going to such depths. XD