Thread:Houki Minami/@comment-25201774-20170812022639/@comment-25201774-20170812031221

It's not my writing process that's the issue. It's Shirou. The way I wrote him. The fact he cries like a baby every single story arc. A story is only as upbeat as the protagonist and this incarnation of Shirou was terrible.

The changes I want encompass everything after the first five chapters. Shirou stopped being a delinquent after about five chapters and that upsets me. It'd be easier to just list the things I wanted to KEEP rather than all of the things I wanted to change, y'know?