Thread:Houki Minami/@comment-26709288-20170204042027

Hi Houki, I just completed the second chapter. i sent it to you on fanfiction doc in case you want to read it before I post it. I really want you to give me a opinion on the battle scene, I already had my beta reader go through the chapter and fix all errors, I just would like someone else to examine the battle scenes, long battle scenes with multiple (especially about 30) fighting participants isn't really my strong suit.  