Talk:Aeroga (Aeroga)/@comment-32878918-20181013000749/@comment-30589841-20181013095845

Its...its  a bt of a mess honestly. Acro, I dont really think story-writing is...well, your speciality. Not that I am saying the story will suck or anything, no no...its just, it feels unpolished and uncollected. Its literally like a trashbin of cool ideas scattered randomely. I thought of fixing this, but eh...its not mine, so I cant do anything with it.