Talk:Corvus Gremory/@comment-26709288-20170915190104/@comment-26709288-20170916120931

Initially from reading your story and from reading this page you build Corvus Gremory around being a character who cares deeply about keeping the peace, is a genius and enlightened politician who knows when to be cunning and how to to respond in given situations. This is exactly very original for a dxd fanfiction (instead of just making him bronze, you gave him actual political brains, which as you said is what he used to handle the Raynare situation peacefully before it could upscale) and makes your character very interesting because as you stated, he chooses to give up his youth, and focus entirely on building a career. Instead of just saying your character can handle himself politically and peacefully, you actually showed it in your writing. Which is also very good.

But then you completely contradict this narrative (which I deeply enjoy and find interesting) with a wide array of other personality traits that contradict this initial build up. Some of these examples that I bring up can be attributed to simply personality quirks/flaws

1. " Another interesting trait of Corvus` personality is that he seemingly enjoys to aggravate and mock in verbal fashion people that he sees as his opponents, along with those that clearly show no respect to him.  "

2. " Riser Phenex insulting Kunou, and is more then willing to use force to teach them respect.  " So is he a politician who seeks peace or is he someone who cares more about how someone thinks about him. Even Sirzechs Lucifer, the strongest devil in history, knows the difference between the two. During his confrontation with Hades, he threatens to fight him, but he didn't because keeping the peace between the grim reapers was much more important than respect.

You can't be both. You can't lash out at people who don't show you respect then attempt to have a moral high ground when others don't.

So while I can respect the story, things like this undermine his moral highground as the protagonist.