Talk:The Dragon's Little Nun/@comment-220.235.53.89-20170829093141

And if you want to post this story, I suggest a little make-over with a beta-reader at your disposal. For one example, when Asia received a letter from Irina; didn't the citizens send Asia as a sacrifice with the assumption that she would be dead? Why did Irina bother sending a letter to a (presumably) dead person?

This story holds enormous potential, but needs better execution.