Talk:Elizabeth White/@comment-2804:431:B72D:588C:4E0:FE55:F377:7BDA-20170928220405/@comment-26709288-20180903213247

Anydeath, I agree with you, I think that Ishibumi just made dxd story with such a easy template that almost every writer feels the need to copy it over and over and over again. Even I made a story that was basically Issei's story with some alteration when I was 14.

>be loner with no friends or something in h.s.

>get killed by hot fallen angel

>reincarnated by Rias Gremory, who for some reason, still treats you exactly like Issei and tries to motivate you with the same dreams, despite it being obvious you don't have the same personality nor dreams as Issei (I mean do you really believe Rias was shaking her tits at Akeno? Koneko? Baby Yuuto?)

>defeats Raynare and redeems her, adding said fallen angel to your harem, Ignoring the fact that she literally made you choke to death on your own blood

>Enter Riser, who you hate as if he kill your mom and is the next Hitler

>defeat Riser or simply kill him, because why not

this plot is so overdone in fanfiction it has become boring. Adding a fem vali to story just makes it very unbearable.

To be fair, there are some people who can pull it off very well or people who did it very early before it became nostalgic however it is far and few in between.