Talk:Geist D. Pheles (The Lovable Devil)/@comment-25201774-20160611012844

OK, right off the bat, I'm a little confused about the family arrangement. First off, that is one hell of a family tree. Second off, how is he Cleria AND Diehauser's brother? Diehauser and Cleria are cousins. Not to mention they're from a different main family. If they were his sibling, he (Vincent) would have been part of the Belial clan....God, it makes me just as confused as the fact Basara Toujou has two mothers and one father (HOW DOES THAT WORK!? SHINMAI MAOU CONFUSES ME SO MUCH SOMETIMES!). XP On the bright side, I have some fairly decent expectations for him since he at least has a REAL-sounding name unlike other DxD fics where there are names so fake that they make me cringe. I mean, it usually gives me a good indication outright how the story will turn out to be.

I mean, I don't base my first thoughts on names. That would be a d*** move. No, but it usually says a lot about how the author will write the story.

His characters sounds interesting and sometimes outright comical and it seems like you put thought into his character unlike other people who do things like "Oh, this is the story about my character named Cakalopola and he's the strongest in the universe."...The sad part is that, in terms of the DxD fanfics nowadays, that's not too big of an exaggeration.

Overall, other than the horribly complicated family tree, I dig it. Can't wait for the story and hopefully good spelling.

Also, the term you were looking for when describing him is Anti-Hero. An Anti-Hero is pretty much a Protagonist who fails to fit the ideal of conventional hero in terms of personality and beliefs. So like Light Yagami or Lelouch Vi Brittannia....More like Lelouch. Light was just an outright prick.