Talk:The Elder Gods/@comment-91.248.126.221-20191226152453/@comment-2A02:8109:113F:FABC:19B3:B529:60B7:878-20191228114858

Its not about your Story writing. I actually love how you write a Story and how much you put in there, but the Power scaling is in my Opinion wrong. First if the Nothingness has a Human Form it would be Oblivion, the Abyss is well Tatarus. Second no Demon or Angel should be stronger than the Dragon Gods and the Hindu Gods (At least the Trimurti and Sakra). SO Lucifer being stronger than Ophis is just wrong. If you write a Second Story please make a better Power scaling and maybe make Ise a badass and give him some good Hertitage like Amatsu-Mikaboshi has his Father was never done and would be epic. I would love to comment on your Storys on Fanfic.net but I did write some eehh bad comments and you blocked me :( Sry about them.