Talk:Divine Sub-Albion/@comment-26709288-20181006162306/@comment-26709288-20181007051018

It's not even the fact that I expect every power to be interesting or new. It's the fact that every single page is just large copy-paste paragraphs from the canon site. He's supposedly writing a future fanfic yet he doesn't do nothing but copy the canon source material. I truely want to read the first chapter of his story but I bet I can already predict it:

>MC comes to Kuoh Academy

>MC acts just like Issei but for some reason girls love it when he's a peeping tom or something

>MC invited on date

>MC killed by girl he dated

>MC reincarnated as devil

>MC wakes up naked next to his new master or maybe the master's queen

I would be really suprised if this didn't happen.

If you're writing a reiteration of the canon story with your own twists (like Bamafelix or other author's do) I would be ok if your first chapter follows this pattern. But if you're marketing a future novel yet you're doing nothing but copy-pasting canon pages then you're not doing anything but re-writing the light novels.