Thread:WarriorMan199456/@comment-30589841-20180606193016/@comment-27657118-20180609205852

I don't see what you were so worried about, man. The chapter was fine and the quality of your writing was consistently as good as ever. No worries.

Izanami was portrayed wonderfully here. The way you conveyed her thoughts and feelings towards the Shinto Underworld, and how terrified she is for both her and Issei's safety, was really accurate to the character. The way you wrote her relationship and interactions with Issei was good too, especially with the latter's compassion for his grandmother, and how Izanami kept getting worried for Issei.

Solar!Issei was written excellently too. I like that you kept his naïveté personality and literal-mindedness, even if it does get him into trouble. Izanami's observation of Issei being too trusting was astute as well, since it shows that for all of his power and achievements, Issei is still a young godling, and is unfamiliar with most people and situations.

The Stranger though, I can only keep guessing for what his intentions are. And the mentioning of Amatsu-Mikaboshi brought me chills. Though weirdly enough, I had the image of a curious Issei excitedly talking to "Grandma" Mikaboshi and wanting to know about her, while Grandma Izanami just stands there in horror and confusion.

And yeah cliffhangers are fun to employ.

As always, can't wait for the next chapter.