Thread:Mirrordeath/@comment-24.84.135.107-20171106052239/@comment-32027406-20171106162725

1.) There are two stories; my law story and the more "generic" story with the French girl. The law story is published, the other one isn't. To be honest, Sous Devil (the title) is a half-parody anyway, with a Nazi Knight and a jingoistic American optimistic Rook. But I apologize for Mademoiselle Japhon. See, my character outline for her is (in my opinion at least) non stereotypical, but I found this cute picture of her eating a baguette, and I couldn't resist making a stereotypical comment. 2.) I used really bad word choice to describe Jaryn's aloofness from devil society. 3.) I have the habit of revising my characters and not updating them in the wiki. I made James less of a ranting maniac and more of a cynic; he's still detestable but not really as absurd as his rough outline, which is still on the wiki. And yeah, like you said, and I've always been saying, he's a normal lawyer. Sure, he would fight in self defense, (which he does against Raynare) but he wouldn't go on the attack. Better to leave that heavy lifting to Rias and company. 4.) Yes, Sirzechs is OOC af. But, uh, I was raised with Hellblazer (inappropriate for kids yes), Neil Gaiman's Sandman, and more recently Supernatural. All feature powerful Angels, and it kind of make an impression on me. So I guess among other things, my story is also a homage to those awesome stories. Yes, it doesn't work for DxD, but I try; also those stories also feature powerful demons (First of the Fallen, Lucifer Morningstar, Azazel, Crowley, respectively) and for the demons they lead, they are people that their subordinates want to be. I kind of convinced myself it was the same with Issei wanting to be like Sirzechs just like how a regular demon wants to be a prince of Hell in supernatural. So while my fic has large, large holes in it, I try to make do with what I have. Thanks for reviewing though, not many do, for the reasons you've just proscribed.